Tuesday, June 9, 2015

5 sentence challenge. Our pick.

Bright, orange leaves breathe in cold foggy air in the natural woods. The sky reflects blue air. There’s  lots of beautiful green bushes growing up tall. No glowing flowers are planted on the extremely muddy pathway.  On the thin leaves there are big and tiny raindrops dripping from leaf to leaf.

By Brooke

2 comments:

  1. Great writing

    Holly

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  2. Hi Brooke

    Really liked the images you created in my head. I could see and feel the wetness.

    Nice work.

    Ms Craig

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